I can honestly say i was thinking the opposite of the mood of the poem when i wrote it....= \ yeah
-.-' but here it is; please comment. = ) the title means 'Lie To Me' in French = )
Mentir `a moi
Tied with my shackles
To the ground.
Pain in my blood,
That still flows down.
Lie to me.
Tell me I'm not dying.
Lie to me.
Tell me I'm still breathing.
I've lost myself in these beautiful
Sceneries, I can't come back down.
There are angels knocking at my door,
I fear they've come to take me.
And I know it's not my time.
Lie to me.
Say you need me,
And I'll stay.
Lie to me.
Break them apart,
You're my only shield.
They've come for my soul,
And I fear they wont leave.
I fear I've lost my way
And I know I can't find myself.
I can't come back down.
I fear there's nothing left of me.
Lie to me.
Silence is too thick,
The deathbed I've created for myself.
Lie to me.
And I promise I'll stay.
Happy Birthday!
4 years ago
4 comments:
if i only write superb, wonderful, mind blowing,.. or any other words to praise you then it wont do justice to the poem nor its enough words to explain your ability.. i couldnt find exact words to write here.. i just see a twinkling star infront of me !!!
I am Reading You For a moment and Its feels as if a Flavours of Poetriese are made for you, I will again go deep to sense and get a rhetorical sense. Its a dawn that I seek for betterment of verses and I wish You could delve upon some postmodernism trends of writing. I Truely Trust, you will make a huge different with your pen. We all are seeking some enlightment In shapelessness and formlessness In Poetries and Thats exactly I would have dreamed In your Poetries! You are doing Great with those Historical Lines!
thankyou,
it means a lot to see such words.
especially since they are truly encouraging.
= )
I came here lately .. but delighted to read many more beautiful poems with full of emotions.
Really, I can't find the words! Again a very strong emotion narrated in such a slendid way!!!
- Raksha
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